镜子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 문장 구조를 더 다양하게 하고 문법적 오류(관사 사용, 어순, 동사형)를 고치세요. 예를 들어 단순 반복(‘check my appearance’)을 피하고 연결어를 사용해 자연스럽게 답을 확장하세요. 또한 빈도 표현을 구체적으로(예: every morning, before I leave) 바꾸면 더 설득력 있습니다.

範例: Yes, I do. I usually check myself in the mirror every morning before I leave the house to make sure my clothes and hair look neat. Because my schedule is often busy, a quick look in the mirror helps me feel confident and ready for the day.

建議: 같은 내용을 반복하지 말고 구매 경험에 대한 구체적 정보(크기, 디자인, 용도, 왜 만족했는지)를 덧붙이세요. 과거시 사용에 맞는 문법(단순과거와 현재완료 구분)을 정확히 쓰세요.

範例: Yes, I bought a compact mirror from Diesel last year. It was affordable and stylish, with a slim design that fits easily in my bag, so I’ve been really happy with it and still use it whenever I need to touch up my appearance.

建議: 문장을 더 간결하고 정확하게 만드세요. 불필요한 반복을 제거하고 전치사와 어순(‘outside’, ‘before meeting someone’)을 고치세요. 또한 연결어를 사용해 이유와 상황을 자연스럽게 연결하세요.

範例: Yes, I usually carry a small mirror in my bag because it’s handy for checking my hair and makeup when I’m out, especially just before meeting friends or going to work.

建議: 부정 응답 후 이유를 더 명확하고 자연스럽게 설명하세요. ‘just functional’ 대신 구체적인 설명(예: 위치, 역할, 왜 장식용으로 두지 않는지)을 추가하면 더 좋습니다. 문법(‘before I go out’)과 쉼표 사용도 주의하세요.

範例: No, I wouldn’t use mirrors primarily as decoration. I have a large mirror in my bedroom, but I keep it there for practical reasons — to check my outfit and hair every morning — rather than as a decorative feature.

× I like looking at mirror because I can check my appearance easily before go out.

✓ I like looking at the mirror because I can check my appearance easily before I go out.

'mirror' needs the definite article 'the' because a specific mirror (the one the speaker uses) is meant. Also the verb phrase 'before go out' is missing the subject and auxiliary; correct form is 'before I go out'.

× Before going out, I usually check my appearance and outfit in the mirror in my room.

✓ Before going out, I usually check my appearance and outfit in the mirror in my room.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no changes necessary. Keep the present simple habitual form and gerund phrase 'Before going out'.

× It is convenient for me.

✓ It is convenient for me.

This sentence is correct in present simple to describe a general state. No correction needed.

× Yes, I bought a mirror at Diesel last year.

✓ Yes, I bought a mirror at Diesel last year.

Correct past simple is used to describe a completed action in the past. No correction needed.

× That mirror was very inexpensive so I was very satisfied with that mirror.

✓ That mirror was very inexpensive, so I was very satisfied with it.

Avoid repeating the noun 'that mirror'; replace the second occurrence with the pronoun 'it'. Also add a comma before 'so' joining the clauses.

× I still use the mirror when I go out to check my appearance.

✓ I still use the mirror when I go out to check my appearance.

This is correct present simple to express a habitual action. No correction needed.

× Yes, I usually carry a mirror with me in my bag because it is convenient for me to check my appearance and hairstyle at outside before I before meeting I, I check my.

✓ Yes, I usually carry a mirror with me in my bag because it is convenient for me to check my appearance and hairstyle outside before meeting someone.

Multiple errors: 'at outside' should be 'outside' (preposition error), the phrase 'before I before meeting I, I check my' is ungrammatical and redundant. Use 'before meeting someone' or 'before I meet someone'. Remove the repeated fragments and place verbs and pronouns in correct order.

× No, I have a big mirror in my room but I don't use it for decoration, I just use it to check my outfit and hairstyle be before I go out in the morning.

✓ No, I have a big mirror in my room, but I don't use it for decoration; I just use it to check my outfit and hairstyle before I go out in the morning.

Remove the stray word 'be'. Add a comma before 'but' and use a semicolon or comma to separate clauses. 'Before I go out in the morning' is the correct time clause.

× It's just functional.

✓ It's just functional.

This short statement is correct in present simple to describe a general property. No correction needed.