自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答直接且语法正确，但只是重复了题目中的信息，缺少具体细节。可以补充自行车的颜色、用途，或你是否喜欢骑它，让回答更自然、更有内容；控制在两三句即可。

範例: Yes, I did. It was a small blue bike, and I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

建議: 回答切题，并提供了原因和例子，但最后一句“considered in health and environment”表达不自然，建议改为“good for people's health and the environment”。第二句可用“which helps them...”连接结果，避免多个动词简单堆叠；也可以补充共享单车或城市通勤等具体细节。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they’re affordable and convenient. Many people cycle to work or school, which helps them avoid traffic and save money. Cycling is also good for people’s health and the environment.

× And cycling is also considered in health and environment.

✓ And cycling is also considered good for health and the environment.

这里的“considered in health”搭配不正确。表示“对健康有益”时，应使用“good for health”或“beneficial to health”。建议记住“be good for + 名词”这一搭配。

× And cycling is also considered in health and environment.

✓ And cycling is also considered good for health and the environment.

在这里，environment 指人们共同生活的自然环境，通常要加定冠词“the”。建议留意表示特定整体概念的名词是否需要冠词，例如“the environment”。