自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 質問には直接答えられていますが、「I had a high school」は意味が通らず、言い直しや文の途中で止まる箇所もあります。「自転車」は “a bike” または “a bicycle” と表現しましょう。また、理由を一つ選び、接続表現を使って具体的に説明すると自然です。

範例: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was in elementary school. I lived in the countryside, so it was an easy way to visit my friends or ride to a park near my house.

建議: 回答は途中で終わっており、都市部と地方の違いについて結論まで述べられていません。また、“However” の繰り返しや “they must use bikes” は不自然で、必ず自転車を使うという強い断定になっています。地方と大都市を対比し、大都市で自転車がどの程度使われるかを一文加えて回答を完結させましょう。

範例: Yes, but it depends on where people live. In rural areas, bikes are popular because they are a convenient and affordable way to get to school or work. In large cities, however, people may use public transport more often, although many still cycle for short trips.

× I lived in countryside.

✓ I lived in the countryside.

Use the definite article the before countryside when referring to the rural area as a general place. Remember to say in the countryside, not in countryside.