自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时要紧扣“bike”，不要把它说成“bag”。可以先直接回答是否有自行车，再补充是谁买的、车的颜色或你经常骑它去哪里。注意过去的事情用过去时，例如用“bought”，并避免重复表达喜欢。

範例: Yes, I did. My father bought me a blue bike when I was about eight, and I loved riding it around our neighbourhood.

建議: 先明确回答自行车是否普及；全文要使用“bikes”或“bicycles”，不要误说成“bags”。如果想介绍共享单车，可以说明人们能通过手机租车，并用“ride”表示骑车。补充一个具体原因或使用场景，并结束完整句子。

範例: Yes, definitely. Bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in big cities, where people can rent shared bikes using an app. They’re convenient for short trips and help people avoid traffic.

× Of course, when I was a child I had a bag which is bought by my father and uh I like it very much

✓ Of course, when I was a child, I had a bag which was bought by my father, and I like it very much.

这里说的是童年时父亲买包的事情，时间在过去，因此应将一般现在时被动结构“is bought”改为一般过去时被动结构“was bought”。“I like it very much”可以表示现在仍然喜欢，所以不必改动。

× Uh definitely bags are very common in my country because we had a famous brand called Halo Dantra and everyone can rent it to write it back. You know, writing helps you

✓ Uh, definitely, bags are very common in my country because we had a famous brand called Halo Dantra, and everyone can rent them to write them back. You know, writing helps you.

“bags”是复数名词，后面的代词应与之对应，使用复数宾格“them”，而不是单数“it”。此处仅调整代词的一致性；“write”可能是词汇选择问题，不属于指定的语法问题类型，因此不作修改。