自行车— Part 1 評分報告

練習Part12026-11-04 01:13:55

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Part 1

考官

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

考生

No, I don't know how to ride a bike and even though I'm a college student now, I only walk through my college.

考官

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

考生

Definitely. I'm now studying in Beijing and there are so many shared bicycle at the street and it is so convenient for all students and workers.

評估

總分

總分: 5.5流暢度與連貫性: 5.5發音: 5.5文法: 5.0詞彙: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

分數: 68.0

建議: 回答基本切题,但问题询问的是你小时候是否有自行车,建议使用过去时直接回答,例如说明小时候没有自行车或没有学会骑车。现在时“I don't know”与过去的时间背景不够一致;“walk through my college”也不太自然,可以说“walk around campus”。可补充一个具体原因或现在的出行方式,并用“because”衔接。

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I never learned how to ride one. Even now, I usually walk around campus to get to my classes.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

分數: 72.0

建議: 回答明确,也提供了在北京的具体观察。注意名词单复数:“shared bicycle”应改为“shared bicycles”,地点表达“at the street”应改为“on the streets”或“around the city”。“it is”指代不清,可改为“they are”,或直接说“bike-sharing is convenient”。还可以补充一个具体使用场景,让理由更充分。

範例: Definitely. I’m studying in Beijing, where you can see shared bicycles all over the city. They’re especially popular with students and office workers because they’re a convenient way to travel short distances.

文法

1: Singular and plural issue(单复数问题)

× There are so many shared bicycle at the street.

✓ There are so many shared bicycles at the street.

“so many”后面必须接可数名词复数,因此“bicycle”应改为“bicycles”。建议看到“many”时检查后面的可数名词是否使用复数形式。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions(介词使用错误)

× There are so many shared bicycle at the street.

✓ There are so many shared bicycles on the street.

表示位于街道上,通常用介词“on”,而不是“at”。可以记住常见搭配“on the street”。

重點詞彙

Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
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