自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question directly, then clarify that you did not own a bike but learned to ride one later. Keep the timeline consistent: “when I was small” conflicts with “when I was 18.” Use past-tense forms such as “learned,” “taught,” and “it took,” and say “ride a bike” rather than “ride on a bicycle.” Avoid fillers and aim for two or three clear sentences.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I learned to ride one when I was 18, after a friend taught me. It took me about two days to get the hang of it.

建議: Give a clear overall opinion and complete your explanation. Specify that you mean Hong Kong, and explain the limited cycling infrastructure more naturally—for example, there are few bike lanes or suitable roads. Avoid repeating “pedestrian street” and finish the contrast about the districts where cycling is more common. Use plural forms such as “bikes” and “districts.”

範例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in Hong Kong overall because there are relatively few dedicated bike lanes, and many streets are busy. However, cycling is more common in some districts, especially in the New Territories, where there are more cycling paths.

× No, I never have a bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I never had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence refers to a finished period in the past, so use the past-tense form had instead of have. Keep the verb tense consistent with was.

× But I do learn, uh, riding bicycle when I was small.

✓ But I did learn to ride a bicycle when I was small.

Because this event happened in the past, use did rather than do. After did, use the base form learn. The corrected sentence also uses the natural construction learn to ride.

× But I do learn, uh, riding bicycle when I was small.

✓ But I did learn to ride a bicycle when I was small.

The usual construction is learn to do something, so use to ride rather than riding after learn. Use the infinitive with to when describing learning a skill.

× But I do learn, uh, riding bicycle when I was small.

✓ But I did learn to ride a bicycle when I was small.

Bicycle is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a bicycle when referring to one bicycle in general.

× I first learned riding a bicycle when I was 18.

✓ I first learned to ride a bicycle when I was 18.

Use learn to do something to describe acquiring a skill. The natural form here is learned to ride, not learned riding.

× My friend teach me how to do that.

✓ My friend taught me how to do that.

The event happened in the past, so use the past-tense form taught rather than the base form teach.

× It takes me two days to learn how to ride on a bicycle.

✓ It took me two days to learn how to ride a bicycle.

The speaker is describing a completed past experience, so use took instead of takes.

× It takes me two days to learn how to ride on a bicycle.

✓ It took me two days to learn how to ride a bicycle.

When describing the activity of cycling, use ride a bicycle without on. Use ride a bicycle as the standard verb phrase.

× I don't think bikes are very popular in my country, but it's popular in some district.

✓ I don't think bikes are very popular in my country, but they are popular in some districts.

The pronoun refers to bikes, which is plural, so use they are instead of it's. Match the pronoun to the noun it refers to.

× I don't think bikes are very popular in my country, but it's popular in some district.

✓ I don't think bikes are very popular in my country, but they are popular in some districts.

Some is followed by a plural countable noun when referring to multiple places. Use districts rather than district.

× Because Hong Kong do not have lots of bicycle Rd.

✓ Because Hong Kong does not have lots of bicycle roads.

Hong Kong is a singular place name, so use does not rather than do not. Use does with a singular subject in the present simple tense.

× Because Hong Kong do not have lots of bicycle Rd.

✓ Because Hong Kong does not have lots of bicycle roads.

After lots of, a countable noun must be plural. Use roads rather than road when referring to multiple roads.

× So people cannot ride bicycle on the pedestrian street.

✓ So people cannot ride a bicycle on the pedestrian street.

Bicycle is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a bicycle when speaking generally about one bicycle.