自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 質問には直接答えられていますが、「I can’t ride a bike still now」は語順が不自然で、「I still can’t ride a bike」が自然です。また、「challenge a bike」はこの意味では使わず、「learn to ride a bike」と言いましょう。言い直しや繰り返しを減らし、子どもの頃に練習したときの結果を一文で説明すると、より明確です。

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child, and I still can’t ride one. I tried to learn when I was younger, but I never got the hang of it.

建議: 「Yes, I think so.」に続けて具体例を挙げている点はよいです。ただし、「for her shopping」は「to go shopping」、「when I walk around」は「when I’m out and about」などが自然です。「and」や「walk」の繰り返しを避け、どのような人が自転車を使うのかを簡潔に述べましょう。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. My mother often rides hers to go shopping, and I see many people cycling when I’m out and about.

× I can't ride a bike still now.

✓ I still can't ride a bike.

Still usually comes before the main verb, or after an auxiliary verb. In this sentence, it should come after the subject and before can't: I still can't ride a bike.