自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答问题，再补充一两个相关细节。注意表达“12岁时”应说“when I was 12”，而不是“in my 12”；“自行车”是“bike”，不要与“bag”混淆。描述颜色时使用过去时“was”，并让理由更清楚、自然。可以简要说明这辆车的颜色或你为什么记得它，避免突然提到女生通常喜欢粉色。

範例: Yes, I got my first bike when I was 12. My parents bought it for me, and it was black and red. I remember it clearly because the bright colours made it easy to spot.

建議: 开头已经直接回答了问题，但后面的表达有较多用词和语法错误。谈论自行车时要使用“bikes”或“ride bikes”，不要说“bags”；表达“从上世纪到现在”可说“for decades”。“所有中国人”过于绝对，可以改成“很多人”。补充一个具体原因，例如骑车方便、经济，或适合短途出行，并注意主谓一致。

範例: Yes, bikes are still quite popular in China, especially for short trips. They’re affordable and convenient, and people can use them to get to work or travel around their neighbourhood. Bike-sharing services have also made cycling easier in many cities.

× Yes I had my first bite in my 12 and my parents bought that bad for me.

✓ Yes, I had my first bike when I was 12, and my parents bought it for me.

表示“我12岁时”应说“when I was 12”或“at the age of 12”，不能说“in my 12”。另外，若这里的“bite”和“bad”是语音识别错误，结合语境应为“bike”；“my parents bought it for me”表示“父母给我买了它”。

× We have a long history of riding bags from last century to today.

✓ We have a long history of riding bikes from the last century to today.

“last century”前通常需要定冠词“the”，所以应说“the last century”。根据上下文，“bags”应是“bikes”；这是词语识别问题，不属于语法类型。

× I mean, I guess all of the Chinese people could red bags because it's convenient and it's cheap.

✓ I mean, I guess all Chinese people can ride bikes because cycling is convenient and inexpensive.

这里是在描述中国人现在普遍可以骑自行车，应用表示一般能力的“can”，而不是通常表示过去能力或假设的“could”。结合语境，“red bags”应为“ride bikes”；“cycling”指骑自行车这项活动，因此后面用单数谓语“is”。