自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly, then give one or two clear details about how you used the bike. Correct the phrasing “I had a bike rid one” and “I loved a lot my bike” to “I had a bike and rode it” and “I loved my bike a lot.” Use past tense consistently, avoid repeating “bike,” and finish your answer instead of trailing off. Aim for no more than five sentences.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I rode it almost every day. I usually cycled in front of our house with the neighborhood boys. It was a lot of fun, and I loved that bike.

建議: Your answer is relevant and gives reasons, but improve article use and phrasing: say “bicycles” or “bikes,” not “the those bikes”; use “a special lane” and “go to school.” Also, say that bikes “help people avoid traffic jams,” rather than that bikes avoid them. Connect your reasons smoothly and add a specific detail, such as where people ride.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work or school because they are affordable and help them avoid traffic jams. In some areas, there are special bike lanes, which makes cycling more convenient.

× I had a bike rid one.

✓ I had a bike. I rode it.

The words do not form a grammatical sentence: rid cannot follow had a bike in this structure, and one does not clearly refer to the bike. Use the past-tense verb rode and the pronoun it. For example, say I had a bike, and I rode it.

× Usually boys come to my house and we play together with our with my bike.

✓ Usually, boys came to my house, and we played together in our neighborhood and rode my bike.

With our with my bike contains an incorrect and repeated preposition phrase. In addition, in our neighborhood is the appropriate phrase for describing where the boys lived or played. Use a clear preposition phrase, such as in our neighborhood.

× Usually boys come to my house and we play together with our with my bike.

✓ Usually, boys came to my house, and we played together in our neighborhood and rode my bike.

The sentence describes a regular activity during childhood, so the past-tense forms came and played are appropriate. When describing a completed activity in that past context, use rode rather than a present-tense verb.

× I loved a lot my bike.

✓ I loved my bike a lot.

The phrase a lot normally follows the object of the verb loved. Place it after my bike: I loved my bike a lot.

× People use the those bikes to go to work, to go to schools, and there is special lane in our street where you can ride the bike.

✓ People use those bikes to go to work and school, and there is a special lane in our street where you can ride a bike.

Do not use the before those because those already determines the noun. Special lane is a singular countable noun and needs an article, so use a special lane. A bike is also a natural way to refer to bikes in general in this sentence.