自行车— Part 1 評分報告

練習Part12026-11-03 22:06:26

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Part 1

考官

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

考生

Yes, I have a bike when I am a child. I drive it into the school and I love reading it around my neighborhood.

考官

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

考生

No, the bag is not popular in our country. Um, it it it uh our city is Urmuchi. It doesn't have the the the back road and it is not not free not

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總分: 5.0流暢度與連貫性: 5.0發音: 5.0文法: 5.0詞彙: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

分數: 38.0

建議: 先直接回答是否有自行车,再用过去时描述经历。这里应使用“had”或“used to have”,而不是现在时“have”;骑自行车用“ride”,不能用“drive”或“read”。表达“骑车去学校”可说“ride it to school”,不需要加“the”。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it to school and around my neighborhood, which I really enjoyed.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

分數: 15.0

建議: 先明确回答自行车是否受欢迎,并避免把“bike”说成“bag”。回答中有较多重复和停顿,后半句也没有表达完整;建议用一两个具体原因说明,例如自行车道较少或骑行不方便。注意使用“bike lanes”表示自行车道,并用“cycling isn't convenient”表达骑行不方便。

範例: No, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country, especially in Urumqi. There aren't many bike lanes, so cycling isn't very convenient for getting around.

文法

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× Yes, I have a bike when I am a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

这句话描述的是童年时期的经历,应使用一般过去时。将 have 改为 had,将 am 改为 was。

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× I drive it into the school and I love reading it around my neighborhood.

✓ I drove it into the school and I loved reading it around my neighborhood.

这句话继续描述过去的童年经历,因此动词应使用一般过去时:drive 改为 drove,love 改为 loved。

重點詞彙

Back— Rear; Reverse; Backward
Free— Without charge; Unencumbered by; Vacant; Independent; On the loose
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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