自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 質問は過去の経験についてなので、「Yes, I did.」と過去形で答えましょう。「when I was first time」は不自然なので「when I first tried to ride it」などにし、「light a bike」は「ride a bike」に直してください。また、同じ内容の繰り返しを避け、父親との練習について具体的に説明すると、自然で効果的な回答になります。

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small bike when I was a child, but it was difficult to ride at first. My dad helped me practise in a nearby park, and I gradually became more confident.

建議: 「bikes are popular」に合わせて、一般的な自転車は複数形の「bikes」で表しましょう。「isn't required require their license」は文法的に不自然なので、「you don't need a licence to ride one」と言えます。理由を簡潔に整理し、「便利」「安い」などの具体的な利点をつなぎ言葉で説明してください。「どこへでも行ける」は言い過ぎなので、利用場面を具体的に述べると説得力が増します。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. You don't need a licence to ride one, and they are an affordable way to get around. For example, many people use bikes for short trips to work or to local shops.

× Yes I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question uses the past-tense auxiliary did, so the short answer should use did as well. Use Yes, I did to answer a past-tense question.

× It was so hard to ride the bike when I was first time, but now I can light a bike because I did a lot of practice with my dad.

✓ It was so hard to ride a bike the first time, but now I can ride a bike because I did a lot of practice with my dad.

When I was first time is not a grammatical phrase. Use the first time after the activity to express when it happened. The correction also uses ride, which is the appropriate verb for using a bike.

× Yes, I think bike is popular in my country because bike isn't required require their license and it can go everywhere and it is very useful and it is cheap. So that's why it is popular.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because bikes do not require a license, can go almost everywhere, and are very useful and cheap. That is why they are popular.

The answer refers to bikes in general, so use the plural noun bikes rather than the singular bike. Keep the noun and its related references plural throughout the sentence.

× Yes, I think bike is popular in my country because bike isn't required require their license and it can go everywhere and it is very useful and it is cheap. So that's why it is popular.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because bikes do not require a license, can go almost everywhere, and are very useful and cheap. That is why they are popular.

Plural subject bikes requires the plural verb are, and in the clause about licenses, use do not require. Make sure each verb agrees with its subject.

× Yes, I think bike is popular in my country because bike isn't required require their license and it can go everywhere and it is very useful and it is cheap. So that's why it is popular.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because bikes do not require a license, can go almost everywhere, and are very useful and cheap. That is why they are popular.

License is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a license when referring to a license in general.