自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答是否有自行车，再补充颜色、是谁买的以及它对你的意义。注意讲过去经历时使用过去时：用“had”而不是“have”；表达“给我买”应说“bought it for me”；“first and only bike”中不需要“one”。最后一句“it lists give me”无法理解，建议用清楚的表达说明你为什么怀念这辆车。

範例: Yes, I had a pink bike when I was a child. My grandfather bought it for me, and it was my first and only bike. I really miss it because it brings back many happy memories.

建議: 回答切题，也提供了中国和朋友的例子，但后半部分表达不清，且部分语法错误影响理解。可用“Many children in China had their own bikes”描述过去，用“my friends and I”表达你和朋友；避免重复使用“also”和“too”。还可以补充自行车受欢迎的原因，例如方便、环保或适合短途出行。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China. When I was a child, many kids in my neighbourhood had their own bikes, and several of my friends still ride them today. They’re convenient for short trips and are also an environmentally friendly way to get around.

× When I was a child I have a pink bike.

✓ When I was a child, I had a pink bike.

句子描述的是“小时候”的情况，属于过去时间，因此应将一般现在时 have 改为一般过去时 had。

× And this bike my grandfather bought to me.

✓ My grandfather bought this bike for me.

表示“为某人买某物”时，通常使用 buy something for someone，而不是 buy something to someone。调整语序后，句子也更清楚自然。

× And this is my first and only one bike that I have.

✓ It was the first and only bike I had.

这里描述的是小时候拥有的自行车，应使用过去时 was 和 had。first and only bike 已能表达“第一辆也是唯一一辆自行车”，不需要在 bike 前再加 one。

× Every kids have their own bikes.

✓ Every kid had their own bike.

Every 后面接可数名词单数，因此应将 kids 改为 kid。相应地，表达每个孩子各自拥有一辆自行车时，可用 their own bike。

× When I become an adult.

✓ When I became an adult.

这句话延续“小时候”的过去叙述，表示“当我长大成人时”，所以 become 应改为过去式 became。