自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你直接回答了“Yes”，但后面的表达不够清楚。注意用过去时谈童年经历，例如用“when I was a child”和“I had”；如果想说明自行车的类型，可以说“a mountain bike”。建议补充一个具体细节，如骑车的地点或频率。

範例: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I had a mountain bike. I often rode it around my neighbourhood after school.

建議: 你的回答没有清楚回应自行车在你们国家是否受欢迎，而且“child”“adult”和“bike”相关表达使用不准确。先明确表态，例如“Bikes are quite popular in my country”，再用一两个具体理由支持观点，比如通勤方便、费用低或有助于锻炼。注意使用复数“children/adults”，并避免重复或含糊表达。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students. They are an affordable and convenient way to travel short distances. However, many adults prefer cars for their daily commute.

× Yes, n in my child I have a manning back.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a bike.

问题中提到的是“when you were a child”，指过去的时间，因此要用一般过去时。应将“have”改为“had”。

× Yes, n in my child I have a manning back.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a bike.

“in my child”不是正确表达。要表达“在我小时候”，可以说“when I was a child”。建议用完整的时间从句来表达年龄阶段。

× Mmm, I think in the child the bag is very good, but in the adult the back maybe is not good.

✓ Mmm, I think bikes are very good for children, but they may not be very good for adults.

表达“对孩子／成年人来说”时，应使用“for children／for adults”，而不是“in the child／in the adult”。泛指一类人时，通常用复数形式。

× Mmm, I think in the child the bag is very good, but in the adult the back maybe is not good.

✓ Mmm, I think bikes are very good for children, but they may not be very good for adults.

“maybe”放在“is”前的“the back maybe is”语序不自然。可以说“maybe they are not good”，也可以用“may not be”表达“可能不太好”。