自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答切题，但要用过去时描述童年经历，例如将“I'm”改为“was”。“It was right basic call”和“is my parents bought for me”表达不清，建议使用简单、准确的词句说明自行车的样子，以及是谁买的。回答可以补充一个具体细节，例如颜色或骑车的地点，并用连接词自然衔接。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was quite basic, but my parents bought it for me. I often rode it around our neighborhood.

建議: 你直接表达了看法，但“because I don't know”没有提供有效理由，也让回答显得不完整。注意让代词与“bikes”保持一致，使用“they”，并补充一个具体原因或例子，例如自行车价格实惠、方便短途出行，或常见于城市街道。回答控制在几句内即可。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. They are an affordable and convenient way to travel short distances, especially in busy cities. You can often see people riding them to work or school.

× Yes, I had a bike when I'm a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

句子描述的是童年时期的经历，整件事发生在过去，因此从句中的 be 动词也要用过去式 was，而不能用现在时 am。建议叙述过去经历时保持时态一致。

× Uh is my parents bought for me.

✓ Uh, my parents bought it for me.

原句中 is 放在主语 my parents 前面，造成句子结构错误；一般过去时的主动句不需要在 bought 前加 is。另外，bought 后需要宾语 it，指代前文提到的自行车。建议使用“主语 + 过去式动词 + 宾语”的结构。

× Yes, I think it's very popular in my country because uh I don't know.

✓ Yes, I think they're very popular in my country because, uh, I don't know.

这里讨论的是复数 bikes，所以应使用复数代词 they，而不是单数代词 it。与 be 动词搭配时应写作 they are（缩写为 they're）。