自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答问题，然后说明父母为什么给你买自行车，以及你小时候如何使用它。注意“bag”与语境不符，应为“bike”；“learn how to write”也和骑自行车无关，可改为“learn how to ride”。建议补充一个具体细节，例如你常去哪里骑车。

範例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bike when I was about six so I could learn to ride and play outside with my friends. We often rode around the park near our home.

建議: 开头应清楚表达自行车是否受欢迎，并避免“bags”这个与问题不符的词。你给出的原因可以保留，但要修正语法：people 后用“live”，而不是“leaves lives”。另外，“not very popular”比“No, I don't think ... probably”更自然；可补充城市或通勤方式的具体情况。

範例: I think bikes are not very popular in my country, especially for commuting. Since the country is quite large, many people live far from where they work, so they usually drive or take public transport. However, bikes are still common in parks and on short trips.

× It's a very large country and people leaves lives far from their workplace so they prefer cars or public transportation.

✓ It's a very large country, and people live far from their workplace, so they prefer cars or public transportation.

主语 people 是复数，谓语动词应使用原形 live，不能使用第三人称单数形式 leaves。原句中的 leaves lives 也造成了谓语重复。建议先找出句子的主语，再根据主语的单复数选择正确的动词形式。