自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答问题，再补充你小时候如何骑车。注意语法：说“learned to ride a bike”，而不是“learned about cycling”；“I just cycling”应改为“I rode”；“parents' bikes”表示父母的自行车。可以补充一个具体细节，例如你通常在哪里骑车。避免重复或含义不清的表达。

範例: No, I didn’t have my own bike as a child. However, I learned to ride one by borrowing my parents’ bikes and using public bikes. I usually rode around the neighborhood.

建議: 回答切题，也提到了共享单车的便利和价格，但“bicyclic bicycle”表达错误，可用“ride bikes”；“it’s cheaper”指代不够明确，可说“they’re inexpensive to rent”；“protect environment”前应加“the”，并注意主谓一致。建议用连接词把原因串联起来，并具体说明骑车如何环保。

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in big cities. Many people use public bikes because they’re inexpensive to rent and easy to find. They’re also a greener way to travel than driving.

× But I learned about cycling in my childhood and I just cycling by some public bicycles or some parents bicy bikes.

✓ But I learned about cycling in my childhood, and I just rode public bicycles or my parents’ bikes.

这句话描述的是童年时期的经历，时态应保持为过去时。原句中“cycling”不能直接充当“just”后的谓语动词；这里应使用“ride”的过去式“rode”。

× You can see many people bicyclic bicycle in my country

✓ You can see many people riding bicycles in my country.

“bicyclic bicycle”不能构成正确的英语谓语结构。这里可用“see + 宾语 + 现在分词”表示看到某人正在做某事，因此应说“see many people riding bicycles”。

× You can pay for them and it's cheaper and also protect environment.

✓ You can pay for them, and they are cheaper and also protect the environment.

“them”指代复数的公共自行车，因此后面应使用复数代词“they”，不能用单数“it”。修改时需让代词与其指代对象保持一致。

× You can pay for them and it's cheaper and also protect environment.

✓ You can pay for them, and they are cheaper and also protect the environment.

“environment”在这里指我们共同生活的自然环境，通常说“the environment”。因此需要在名词前加定冠词“the”。