自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevaba doğrudan yanıt verin; “especially” bu bağlamda doğal değil. “Through my child” yerine “throughout my childhood” kullanabilirsiniz. Geçmişteki alışkanlığı anlatırken “I used to ride” veya “I often rode” deyin. Son cümledeki zaman ve anlam belirsiz; bisikletin sizin için neden önemli olduğunu kısa ve açık bir ayrıntıyla açıklayın.

範例: I didn’t have my own bike when I was a child, but I often rode my sister’s. I enjoyed cycling around our neighborhood with her, so bikes were an important part of my childhood.

建議: İlk cümlede görüşünüzü daha doğrudan ifade edin. “Especially” ve “in the elder lives of people” doğal kullanımlar değil; bunun yerine “as a means of everyday transport” ve “among adults” ifadelerini kullanabilirsiniz. “It’s isn’t” yerine “they aren’t” deyin; çocuklar ve yetişkinler arasındaki farkı tek, akıcı bir karşılaştırmayla açıklayın.

範例: Bikes aren’t especially popular as a means of everyday transport in my country. They’re quite common among children, but most adults prefer public transport or their own cars, especially when commuting.

× Especially I didn't have my own bike, but umm, through my child, I used my sister's umm, bicycle.

✓ I didn't have my own bike, but during my childhood, I used my sister's bicycle.

Through my child is not the correct prepositional phrase for describing a period of time. Use during my childhood. The opening word Especially is also unnecessary here, so it has been omitted.

× And so it's it was also be the very important for me having a bike after.

✓ So it was also very important for me to have a bike afterward.

The answer describes a past experience, so use the past-tense verb was. The sequence it's it was also be incorrectly mixes forms and repeats the subject and verb.

× And so it's it was also be the very important for me having a bike after.

✓ So it was also very important for me to have a bike afterward.

Do not use the before the adjective phrase very important in this sentence. The correct structure is it was very important.

× And so it's it was also be the very important for me having a bike after.

✓ So it was also very important for me to have a bike afterward.

After it is important for me, use the infinitive to have to explain what was important. Having does not fit this construction.

× Especially it's isn't a very popular in daily life but in childhood it is common.

✓ Bikes aren't very popular in daily life, but they are common during childhood.

The original combines it's and isn't, creating an incorrect present-tense verb phrase. Use aren't with the plural subject bikes. The corrected sentence keeps the general present tense used to describe popularity.

× Especially it's isn't a very popular in daily life but in childhood it is common.

✓ Bikes aren't very popular in daily life, but they are common during childhood.

Popular is an adjective, so it does not take the article a in this sentence. Say bikes aren't very popular, not bikes aren't a very popular.

× But uh in the elder lives of people it is not very common.

✓ But among older people, it is not very common.

Use among to describe something that is uncommon within a group of people. In the elder lives of people does not express this meaning correctly.

× But uh in the elder lives of people it is not very common.

✓ But among older people, it is not very common.

Elder is not natural in this phrase. Use older to describe people by age, and place the adjective directly before people.