自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question directly in the past tense. Your response is unclear because “I want the bike along with my child” does not explain whether you had a bike as a child. If you mean that you hope to get a bike for your child, say so as an additional detail. Use a short, clear sentence and a linking phrase such as “but” or “now.”

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. However, I’d like to buy one for my child when they’re older.

建議: Start with a clear answer, such as “Yes, they are,” and use natural phrasing: “Bikes are popular in my country.” Avoid repeating “bike” and listing brands without a complete sentence. Give one or two specific examples, and use a linking word to explain or add information. Check brand names and pronunciation, such as Bajaj Pulsar and TVS.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially for commuting. For example, many people ride Bajaj Pulsar or TVS models because they’re practical and relatively affordable.

× No, I want the bike along with my child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past situation, but want is in the present tense. Use didn't have to answer about whether you owned a bike as a child.

× Yes, of course my country's the bikes are more popular, especially brand like Pulsar. Bajaj in that pulsar pmw uh then tbs uh then so many bikes are there

✓ Yes, of course. Bikes are popular in my country, especially brands like Pulsar, Bajaj, and TVS. There are many bikes.

The original combines ideas in an unclear, incomplete structure. Use a complete sentence with a clear subject and verb, and separate the ideas with appropriate punctuation. The unclear spoken words have been omitted.

× especially brand like Pulsar

✓ especially brands like Pulsar

The answer refers to multiple brands, so the plural noun brands is needed. Use a plural noun when giving several examples.

× so many bikes are there

✓ There are many bikes.

In a standard statement expressing existence, place there before the verb: There are many bikes. The original word order is not appropriate for this statement.