自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant and includes helpful details about when and where you rode your bike. Use the natural phrase “learned to ride a bike” rather than “learned it,” and avoid repeating “I used to” by combining the final details more smoothly.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I learned to ride it when I was five, and I often went to the park with my parents to ride around in the evenings.

建議: You give clear reasons and a relevant example. Improve naturalness by saying “offer a quick way to get around” instead of “provide quick commute,” and say “squeeze through narrow alleyways.” Break up the long sentence with a linking phrase such as “Also” or “For example.”

範例: Definitely. Bikes are very popular in my country because they’re more affordable than many other vehicles. They’re also a quick way to get around, especially in busy areas where cyclists can pass through narrow alleyways.

× Definitely, I would say that bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable as compared to other vehicles and they provide quick commute because they are smaller in size so you can squeeze through like small alleyways.

✓ Definitely, I would say that bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable compared with other vehicles and they provide a quick commute because they are smaller in size, so you can squeeze through small alleyways.

Commute is a singular countable noun here, so it needs an article; use a quick commute. Also, through already expresses movement inside and out of alleyways, so like is unnecessary in this sentence. Use compared with for a natural comparison.