自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Bạn trả lời trực tiếp rằng mình không có xe đạp, nhưng cần diễn đạt tự nhiên và chính xác hơn. Tránh lặp từ đệm như “uh”; dùng “my father’s and older brother’s bikes” để nói xe của bố và anh trai, và dùng “I felt scared” thay cho “I felt scary”. Có thể bổ sung ngắn gọn lý do vì sao bạn không tiếp tục tập đi xe.

範例: No, I didn't. I tried riding my father's and older brother's bikes, but I couldn't balance well and felt nervous. So I never had one of my own.

建議: Bạn cần trả lời rõ ngay rằng xe đạp có phổ biến hay không, thay vì bắt đầu bằng thông tin nơi sinh. Sửa “grow up” thành “grew up”, “by” thành “bikes/bicycles”, và dùng cấu trúc so sánh quá khứ với hiện tại. Hãy nêu một lý do cụ thể, chẳng hạn trước đây xe máy và ô tô chưa phổ biến; có thể thêm một nhận xét ngắn về tình hình hiện nay ở Hà Nội.

範例: Yes, I think bicycles used to be quite popular in Vietnam, especially before motorbikes and private cars became common. However, in a busy city like Hanoi, many people now prefer motorbikes because they are faster and more convenient.

× I tried to ride a bike, uh, from my father and my, uh, old brother, but, uh, it didn't work.

✓ I tried to ride a bike with my father and my older brother, but it didn't work.

Use with to indicate that your father and brother were with you while you were trying to ride the bike. From suggests that the bike came from them, rather than that they accompanied you.

× I'm feel I felt scary when, uh, riding a bike.

✓ I felt scared when I was riding a bike.

The question is about your childhood, so use the past tense felt. The phrase I'm feel is not grammatically correct; use I felt. Including I was also makes the clause about riding the bike complete.

× I'm feel I felt scary when, uh, riding a bike.

✓ I felt scared when I was riding a bike.

Scared describes how you felt, while scary describes something that frightens people. Use scared to describe your own feeling.

× I was born and, uh, grow up in Hanoi city.

✓ I was born and grew up in Hanoi.

Both actions happened in the past, so use the past-tense form grew, not the base form grow.

× So I think that by was very popular in the past when a motorbike or cars, I mean private cars was not a popular line.

✓ So I think bikes were very popular in the past, when motorbikes or private cars were not as popular.

Use the plural noun bikes to refer to bikes in general. Use motorbikes to keep the nouns in the comparison parallel.

× So I think that by was very popular in the past when a motorbike or cars, I mean private cars was not a popular line.

✓ So I think bikes were very popular in the past, when motorbikes or private cars were not as popular.

The plural subject bikes takes were, not was. In the second clause, the coordinated plural subjects motorbikes or private cars also require were. Make sure the verb agrees with the subject in number.