自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答直接，并用上学经历作了具体补充。可以把“used my bike to travel to school”换成更自然简洁的“rode my bike to school”，并补充一个相关细节，例如骑车需要多久或你是否喜欢这段经历。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. When I was about 11, I rode it to school every morning, which took around 15 minutes. I really enjoyed the ride because it gave me a bit of exercise before class.

建議: 你清楚表达了观点，也给出了公共交通便利这一原因。不过答案在句尾中断，导致意思不完整；“uh”“for example, like”等填充表达也影响流畅度。建议用完整句子说明公共交通如何影响骑车习惯，并补充一个具体场景或例子。注意，如果想表达交通费用低，应明确说明是公共交通便宜。

範例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country, especially in large cities. Public transport is convenient and relatively cheap, so many people take the bus or the underground to get to work. Cycling is more common for exercise or short trips.

× So a lot of people choose to use, for example, like tube and buses instead of using bicycles as it's very cheap and

✓ So a lot of people choose to use, for example, the tube and buses instead of using bicycles, as public transportation is very cheap.

“tube”在这里指英国的地铁系统，通常要在前面加定冠词“the”。原句中的“for example”和“like”重复表达举例，修改时删去了“like”。此外，原句末尾的“it's”指代不够清楚，因此改成“public transportation”，明确说明便宜的是公共交通。