自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答问题，并统一使用过去时（例如“didn’t have”）。注意“bike”的发音和拼写；“when I wash”不符合语境，建议改为“when I was a child”。“cramped”重复且不适合形容交通拥堵，可用“congested”或“crowded”。最后，“a chance to riding”应改为“a chance to ride”。

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. The roads in my city were usually very congested, and there weren’t many safe places to cycle. So, I mostly walked or took public transport.

建議: 观点清楚，也给出了公共交通发达这一原因，但“fast and cheap”与“faster and cheaper”重复。注意说“heavy traffic”，不要加“a”；“cycling lays”应为“cycle lanes”。结尾句子不完整，请补充完整的结果或原因，并使用一个连接词衔接，例如“also”或“as a result”。

範例: Not really. Public transport is well developed in my country, so many people prefer to take the subway, buses, or ferries. These options are generally affordable and convenient. Also, heavy traffic and a lack of cycle lanes can make cycling less appealing.

× No, I don't have a bite when I wash when I was child because in my city the transport is very cramped and people are very cramped in the street.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because in my city the transport is very cramped and people are very cramped in the street.

问题是在回忆童年经历，时间是过去，因此应将一般现在时“don't have”改为一般过去时“didn't have”。另外，原句中的“when I wash”与上下文不符，改为“when I was”以表达过去。

× No, I don't have a bite when I wash when I was child because in my city the transport is very cramped and people are very cramped in the street.

✓ No, I don't have a bike when I was a child because in my city the transport is very cramped and people are very cramped in the street.

表示“一个孩子”时，单数可数名词“child”前需要冠词，因此应说“a child”。

× I don't have a chance to riding a bicycle.

✓ I don't have a chance to ride a bicycle.

“chance to do something”中的“to”是不定式标记，后面应接动词原形“ride”，不能接动名词“riding”。

× In my country, public transport is very well developed, and people usually travel by subway, buses and ferries because they are fast and cheap, faster and cheaper.

✓ In my country, public transport is very well developed, and people usually travel by subway, bus, and ferry because they are faster and cheaper than bikes.

“faster”和“cheaper”是比较级，通常需要说明比较对象。这里补充“than bikes”，明确公共交通是与自行车相比更快、更便宜。

× So there is a heavy traffic and limited cycling lays.

✓ So there is heavy traffic and limited cycling lanes.

“Traffic”通常作不可数名词，表示“交通拥堵”时不加不定冠词“a”，因此应说“heavy traffic”。

× So there is a heavy traffic and limited cycling lays.

✓ So there is heavy traffic, and there are limited cycling lanes.

“There is”用于单数名词或不可数名词，“cycling lanes”是复数名词，因此应使用“there are”。将两部分拆开表达，可以让主谓搭配更清楚。