自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答切题，也提到了买车年龄和学骑车的经历。注意避免重复和自我纠正，例如“when I was five five years old”；过去的经历应统一使用过去时，把“go”改为“went”。句子结尾需要完整，可以补充一个具体细节，例如骑车去哪里或当时的感受。建议控制在两三句内，让回答更流畅自然。

範例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was five, and that was when I learned to ride. I often rode it outside with my friends.

建議: 回答有明确观点，也用扫描二维码说明了共享单车的使用方式，内容具体。注意名词单复数：“many shared bikes”；“use it to everywhere”不自然，可改为“ride it wherever you want”。减少“uh”等填充词，并避免重复使用“you can”，让表达更简洁连贯。也可以补充共享单车受欢迎的原因，例如方便或适合短途出行。

範例: Yes, I think they are very popular, especially in Shanghai. There are shared bikes all over the city, and people can unlock one by scanning a QR code. They’re convenient for short trips, so many people use them to get around.

× I have my I had my first bike when I was five five years old.

✓ I had my first bike when I was five years old.

这件事发生在过去，应该用一般过去时 had，而不是现在时 have。口语中的重复属于自我修正或重复表达，不影响修正后的句子。

× At that time I began to learn how to ride a bicycle and I always and at that time I always go outside.

✓ At that time, I began to learn how to ride a bicycle, and I always went outside.

At that time 指过去的时间，因此描述过去经常发生的事情时，应将 go 改为过去式 went。讲过去的经历时，注意相关动词的时态保持一致。

× Now in my country, in Shanghai, uh, there are many shared bike on the road.

✓ Now, in my country, in Shanghai, there are many shared bikes on the road.

many 后面应接可数名词的复数形式，因此 bike 应改为 bikes。看到 many、several 等表示数量的词时，要检查后面的可数名词是否需要加复数词尾。

× If you want to ride a bike, you can scan the QR code on the bike and you can use it to everywhere you want.

✓ If you want to ride a bike, you can scan the QR code on it and ride it wherever you want.

everywhere 是表示地点的副词，前面不需要加 to。可以说 go 或 ride somewhere，也可以用 wherever you want 表示“你想去的任何地方”。