自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答问题，再补充一两个清楚、相关的细节。后面几句语义不清，且时态和表达有问题；可以具体说自行车的颜色、用途或骑车的感受。避免使用自己不确定的词语，并将回答控制在五句以内。

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood. It was a lot of fun, especially when I rode with my friends.

建議: 观点明确，但需要修正语法并使用准确的词语：说“most people ride bikes”，而不是“most of people wear”；“cheaper”应使用比较级形式。用句号分开观点和理由，并补充具体说明，例如自行车适合短途出行。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them because they are cheaper than cars and convenient for short trips. They are also easy to park in busy areas.

× Yes I do most of people wear the shorter bags they are cheapen and convenient for shorter trips

✓ Yes, I do. Most people wear the shorter bags. They are cheap and convenient for shorter trips.

表示“多数人”时，通常用“most + 名词”，所以应说“most people”，不能说“most of people”。如果使用“most of”，后面通常要接限定词，例如“most of the people”。

× Yes I do most of people wear the shorter bags they are cheapen and convenient for shorter trips

✓ Yes, I do. Most people wear the shorter bags. They are cheap and convenient for shorter trips.

“Cheapen”是动词，意思是“使变便宜”，不能放在“are”后面描述事物。这里需要形容词“cheap”，表示“便宜”。