自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答“有”，再说明自行车是谁送的以及你小时候如何使用。注意时态：讲童年经历应使用过去时，如“had”“was given”“rode”。“in my child”应改为“when I was a child”，“a gift by”应改为“a gift from”；“choice”是名词，应使用动词“chose”或“rode”。补充细节时可用“because”或“for example”连接，表达控制在5句以内。

範例: Yes, I did. My grandparents gave me a bike when I was about six. I often rode it to school, as many of my classmates did too.

建議: 开头直接表明看法，例如“Yes, definitely”，不要用不自然的“Exactly”。说明自行车普及的原因，并用具体例子支撑，例如街上常见自行车、大学校园有共享单车。“in everywhere”应改为“everywhere”，“share bike”应改为“shared bikes”，“choice”应改为动词“choose”。删除过多的填充词，并使用“because”“for example”等连接信息；尽量补充共享单车带来的便利。

範例: Yes, definitely. Bikes are quite popular in my country because they’re an affordable and convenient way to get around. For example, many universities have shared bikes, so students can easily cycle between classes.

× Sure, I have a bike in my child is a gift by my grandma and grandpa.

✓ Sure, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a gift from my grandma and grandpa.

语法问题类型：过去时错误（ID 5）。问题讲的是童年经历，应该使用过去时：用 had 代替 have，用 was 代替 is。

× Sure, I have a bike in my child is a gift by my grandma and grandpa.

✓ Sure, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a gift from my grandma and grandpa.

语法问题类型：介词使用错误（ID 11）。表示“在我小时候”应说 when I was a child，而不是 in my child；表示礼物的赠送者时应使用 from，而不是 by。

× At approximately 6 years old we go to school and many students choice.

✓ At approximately six years old, we went to school, and many students chose to ride bikes.

语法问题类型：过去时错误（ID 5）。句子描述的是过去的经历，因此应将 go 改为过去式 went，并将表示过去选择的动词改为 chose。

× Exactly, uh, buying our country is very popular because, uh, you can see it in everywhere and in university we have umm, share bike.

✓ Exactly. Biking is very popular in our country because you can see bikes everywhere, and we have shared bikes at universities.

语法问题类型：现在时错误（ID 6）。这里是在谈论自行车在本国目前是否流行，应使用一般现在时。修改后的句子用 is 来表达目前的情况。

× Exactly, uh, buying our country is very popular because, uh, you can see it in everywhere and in university we have umm, share bike.

✓ Exactly. Biking is very popular in our country because you can see bikes everywhere, and we have shared bikes at universities.

语法问题类型：介词使用错误（ID 11）。everywhere 本身已经表示“到处”，前面不需要加 in。表示大学里有共享单车，可以说 at universities。

× Exactly, uh, buying our country is very popular because, uh, you can see it in everywhere and in university we have umm, share bike.

✓ Exactly. Biking is very popular in our country because you can see bikes everywhere, and we have shared bikes at universities.

语法问题类型：单复数错误（ID 1）。这里泛指各处都能看到自行车，而且大学里有共享单车，因此用复数 bikes 更合适。

× Umm, everyone can uh, choice in uh, on course.

✓ Of course, everyone can choose a bike.

语法问题类型：情态动词使用错误（ID 4）。情态动词 can 后面必须接动词原形，choice 是名词，应改为动词 choose。

× Umm, everyone can uh, choice in uh, on course.

✓ Of course, everyone can choose a bike.

语法问题类型：介词使用错误（ID 11）。固定表达“当然”是 of course，不是 in course 或 on course。