自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你有提到自己小时候没有自行车，并补充了弟弟的情况，回答方向正确。但“boat bike”表达不清，应直接说“a bike”；回忆过去时要使用过去式，例如“didn’t have”和“rode”。“in junior high school”前不需要加“the”。最后一句没有说完，建议补充一个完整、具体的信息，并避免重复使用“umm”。

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My younger brother had one, though, and he rode it every day when he was in junior high school.

建議: 你直接回答了自行车在中国很受欢迎，也提到了价格和通勤用途，这是相关的支持信息。但开头有重复，注意“bikes”要用复数；“in my country, China”比“in my country China”更自然。“when 2 in their life”和句末“see on”意思不清且句子未完成。建议用完整句说明人们会骑车去哪里，并补充一个具体观察或场景。

範例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in China. They’re relatively affordable, and people use them to get to work or school. You can still see many people riding bikes around cities, especially for short trips.

× I don't have a boat bike when I was a child.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

句子描述的是童年时的情况，时间在过去，因此应将一般现在时 don't 改为一般过去时 didn't。此处的 boat 看起来像口误或转录干扰；如果原意是“自行车”，直接说 a bike 即可。

× He was in the junior high school.

✓ He was in junior high school.

表示在读初中或处于初中阶段时，junior high school 通常不加定冠词 the。

× He ride the bike every day.

✓ He rode the bike every day.

这里描述的是过去的习惯，ride 的一般过去式是 rode，不能使用原形 ride。

× At that time he had a lot of.

✓ At that time he had a lot of fun.

a lot of 后面通常需要接名词；原句在 of 后缺少必要成分，句子不完整。根据语境，可以说 had a lot of fun（玩得很开心）。

× I think bike are bikes are quite popular in my country China.

✓ I think bikes are quite popular in my country, China.

泛指自行车时应使用复数 bikes；复数主语与 are 搭配。原句中 bike are bikes are 还重复了表达，整理后保留一次即可。

× Many people can afford one bicycle when 2 in their life.

✓ Many people can afford one bicycle in their lifetime.

when 2 in their life 不是完整的从句：when 后缺少明确的主语和谓语，数字 2 也无法在此处构成完整表达。若这部分是口误或转录错误，可删去；in their lifetime 可以表达“在他们一生中”。

× Usually we can see on.

✓ Usually we can see people riding bikes.

原句中的 see on 后缺少宾语或完整的表达，句子意思没有说完。结合上下文，可以补全为“通常可以看到人们骑自行车”。