自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question directly and make the timeline clear: you rode bikes as a child, but received your own bike at 20. Correct the repeated or inaccurate phrases (“bike bike,” “wherever where”) and use a natural expression such as “I’ve been riding it recently.” Add one specific detail about where you ride. Keep the answer concise and avoid restarting the sentence.

範例: Yes, I rode bikes quite often as a child, although I didn’t own one until I was 20. My parents bought me one then, and I’ve been using it recently to get around town.

建議: Give a clear answer first, then support it with one or two specific reasons or examples. Correct “wikes” and “bags” to “bikes,” use “young people” and “older people,” and say “go to work” rather than “go to office.” Avoid fillers, repetition, and the unfinished ending; describe a practical use or a reason bikes are popular.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people and commuters. Many people ride them to work or use them for short errands because they’re affordable and convenient in busy areas.

× I'm recently riding my bike wherever where I want to go.

✓ I've recently been riding my bike wherever I want to go.

The present perfect continuous is appropriate for an activity that began recently and is continuing now. Use wherever by itself; it already means to any place where.

× wherever where I want to go

✓ wherever I want to go

Wherever already expresses the meaning of where, so using both words together is redundant. Use wherever on its own.

× also in old people also

✓ also among older people

Use among when referring to members of a group, such as older people. In is not the appropriate preposition in this phrase.

× to go to office

✓ to go to the office

Office is a singular countable noun here, so it needs an article. Use the when referring to the place where people work.