自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答问题，再补充礼物来源和骑车地点。注意固定搭配：应说“had my own bike”，而不是“a bike of myself”；骑自行车用“rode”，不是“wrote”。“birthday hip”表达不清，建议改为“birthday present”；另外，“when I was three”表示三岁时，确认这是否符合事实。控制在两句左右，并注意句子之间的连接。

範例: Yes, I had my own bike when I was a child. My parents gave it to me for my birthday, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood.

建議: 回答切题，也给出了例子，但句尾有明显的自我修正和主谓一致错误。建议把“have has”改为“has”，并统一时态和代词；谈普遍情况时，可以用“children”及“when they are young”，避免单数代词来回切换。还可以补充一个具体原因或场景，让观点更有说服力。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many children have their own bikes, and they often ride them to school or around their neighborhoods.

× Yes, I had a bike of myself when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had my own bike when I was a child.

“of myself”不能用来表达“我自己的”。这里应使用所有格结构“my own bike”，表示“我自己的自行车”。

× For example, almost every child have has his or her own bike when he was young.

✓ For example, almost every child has his or her own bike when he was young.

“every child”表示每个孩子，语法上是单数，因此一般现在时中动词应使用第三人称单数形式“has”。原句中的“have has”还多出了一个“have”，应删除。