自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答是否有自行车，再补充一两个具体细节，例如几岁开始骑、在哪里学会或当时如何使用。注意语法：说“learn to ride a bike”，而不是“learn bicycle”；过去的经历要使用过去时，如“I learned”；“give up”后面需要说明放弃了什么。避免句子中断和重复表达。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I learned to ride it when I was about six, because many children in my city rode bikes. I used to cycle around my neighbourhood with my friends, but I don’t ride very often now.

建議: 开头直接表达观点是好的。接下来用一两个具体理由或例子说明自行车为什么受欢迎，例如自行车比赛、通勤或锻炼。注意自然搭配：可以说“cycling competitions”，而不是“the competition of bicycle”；“Chinese people really enjoy...”比“Chinese people very like...”更自然。把最后的想法拆分或用连接词串联，避免句子过长。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China. There are cycling competitions, and many people enjoy riding for exercise. In some cities, people also use shared bikes to get around because they’re convenient for short journeys.

× It is very popular for the young children to learn bicycle in my city, so I've learned about bike.

✓ It is very popular for young children to learn to ride a bicycle in my city, so I've learned about bikes.

泛指“年幼的孩子”时通常不加定冠词 the；bicycle 是可数名词，单数形式前需要冠词。这里用 learn to ride a bicycle 表达“学习骑自行车”更准确。

× It is very popular for the young children to learn bicycle in my city, so I've learned about bike.

✓ It is very popular for young children to learn to ride a bicycle in my city, so I learned to ride a bike.

这段内容描述的是小时候学骑车的经历，应使用一般过去时 learned。现在完成时 I've learned 通常表示与现在有关的经历或结果，不如一般过去时符合这里的过去时间背景。

× But nowadays I've give up of that because it is not not very.

✓ But nowadays, I've given it up because I don't do it anymore.

现在完成时的结构是 have/has + 过去分词，因此 give 应改为过去分词 given。

× But nowadays I've give up of that because it is not not very.

✓ But nowadays, I've given it up because I don't do it anymore.

give up 是及物短语动词，后面直接接宾语，不需要加 of。可以说 give it up。

× But nowadays I've give up of that because it is not not very.

✓ But nowadays, I've given it up because I don't do it anymore.

because 后面的原句 “it is not not very” 没有完整表达，very 后缺少形容词或其他补充成分，因此从句不完整。可以改成完整的从句，例如 I don't do it anymore。

× We even have the competition of bicycle and Chinese people very like the sports and riding bicycle is a good way.

✓ We even have bicycle competitions, and Chinese people really like sports. Riding a bicycle is a good way to exercise.

泛指自行车比赛、体育运动时，不需要用 the；bicycle 是可数名词，单数形式前要加 a。修改后的表达也补全了“骑自行车是锻炼的好方法”这一句子的意思。

× We even have the competition of bicycle and Chinese people very like the sports and riding bicycle is a good way.

✓ We even have bicycle competitions, and Chinese people really like sports. Riding a bicycle is a good way to exercise.

very 通常不能直接修饰动词 like。表达“非常喜欢”时应使用 really like，或使用 like ... very much。