自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答切题，也提到了自行车的来源和骑车的原因。注意讲过去的经历时要用过去时，将“I have”改为“I had”。“a nice exercise that I can spend time with my mother”表达不自然；可以说骑车既是锻炼，也让你有机会和妈妈共度时光。建议用一两个具体细节补充，并用“because”或“also”连接理由。

範例: Definitely. I had a bike when I was six; it was a birthday present from my mother. I loved riding it because it was a fun way to exercise, and it gave me a chance to spend time with her.

建議: 观点明确，也举出了大城市通勤的例子，但“an expensive way”与共享单车的语境不符，应改为“an inexpensive/affordable way”。注意冠词和名词单复数：“a shared bicycles”应改为“shared bikes”或“a shared bike”。可以用“for example”引出具体例子，并避免口语填充词“uh”，让表达更流畅。

範例: Yes, I’d say bikes are quite popular in China. They’re an affordable and convenient way to get around, especially in large cities. For example, many commuters use shared bikes to travel to work or to connect to public transport.

× I have a bike when I was 6, my birthday present from my mother.

✓ I had a bike when I was 6; it was a birthday present from my mother.

句子谈论的是童年时（when I was 6）拥有自行车的经历，因此应使用一般过去时。把 have 改为 had。后半句补上 it was，使“它是母亲送的生日礼物”表达完整。

× In large cities some commuters choose a shared bicycles to go to work.

✓ In large cities, some commuters choose a shared bicycle to go to work.

冠词 a 后面应接单数可数名词，因此 bicycles 应改为 bicycle。也可以说“choose shared bicycles”，但不能同时使用 a 和复数名词。