自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 질문에 먼저 간단하고 분명하게 답하세요. ‘bike practice’와 ‘tried to take a bike’는 자연스럽지 않으므로 자전거를 탔거나 타는 법을 배웠다는 표현인 ‘rode a bike’ 또는 ‘learned to ride a bike’를 사용하세요. 반복되는 ‘I’와 ‘about’은 삭제하고, 어디서 탔는지나 누구와 탔는지 구체적인 세부 정보를 덧붙이면 좋습니다.

範例: Yes, I did. I learned to ride a bike when I was about six years old. I used to practise with my father in a park near our home.

建議: ‘Absolutely my country’ 대신 ‘Yes, I think they are’처럼 질문에 직접 답하세요. 자전거 가격이 비싸다는 부분은 의미가 불분명하므로, 인기가 있는 이유를 명확하고 논리적으로 설명하는 것이 좋습니다. ‘There is a lot of cycling infrastructure’처럼 자연스러운 표현을 사용하고, 자전거 도로가 많다는 구체적인 근거를 덧붙이세요.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in South Korea. Many cities have dedicated bike lanes, so people can ride more safely. They are also a convenient way to exercise or travel short distances.

× Of course I I did bike practice about about 20 years ago.

✓ Of course, I did. I practiced riding a bike about 20 years ago.

The phrase did bike practice is not formed correctly in this context. Use the verb practiced, followed by riding a bike. The repeated words are speech disfluencies rather than grammar errors.

× My countries fewer price is very expensive

✓ Bike prices in my country are very expensive.

Fewer refers to a smaller number of countable items, not to the cost of something. To describe high costs, say that prices are very expensive. Use the singular my country when referring to one country.

× there are many bike infrastructure in Korea

✓ There is a lot of bike infrastructure in Korea.

Infrastructure is generally an uncountable noun, so it takes the singular verb is rather than are. Use a lot of with an uncountable noun instead of many.

× so and my there are many bike infrastructure in Korea.

✓ Bike prices in my country are very expensive, and there is a lot of bike infrastructure in Korea.

The sequence so and my there are does not form a grammatical clause. Use and to connect the two ideas, and begin the second clause with there is.