自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ответьте прямо и используйте правильное местоимение: «I had one», а не «I had» или «I had them». Уточните, что вы имеете в виду под «rollers» — например, roller skates. Сократите паузы и повторы, а затем добавьте одну конкретную причину или деталь.

範例: Yes, I had a bike as a child, but I didn’t ride it very often. I preferred roller-skating, so I usually spent my free time on roller skates instead.

建議: Сначала дайте ясный ответ и объясните, что именно вы считаете популярным: обычные велосипеды или электрические. Исправьте грамматику: используйте «people», а не «citizens» в этом контексте, и «especially for long trips». Не говорите, что транспорт «useless» на дорогах, если имеете в виду, что он удобнее; приведите конкретную причину, например большие расстояния или дорожные условия.

範例: Bikes aren’t especially popular in my country, particularly for longer journeys. Many people prefer cars because they’re more comfortable, while electric bikes and motorcycles are common for shorter trips.

× I mostly, uh, ride uh, not on my bike, but on more on my uh, rollers.

✓ I mostly rode, not on my bike, but more on my rollers.

The student is describing childhood experiences, so the past tense is needed. Use rode, the past-tense form of ride. The phrase on more on is also corrected to more on to remove the repeated preposition and put more in the correct position.

× I had, but I didn't use them so much.

✓ I had one, but I didn't use it very much.

The pronoun them is plural, but it refers to a single bike. Use it for a singular, non-human noun. One makes the implied noun bike clear after had.

× Not really 'cause mostly citizens use a car specially it's a long trip or even they use electric bikes or or motorcycles which makes it more comfortable and useless in our roads.

✓ Not really, because most citizens use cars, especially when it's a long trip, or they use electric bikes or motorcycles, which are more comfortable and useful on our roads.

The phrase especially it's a long trip does not correctly connect the two clauses. Use especially when to introduce the situation in which people use a car. The revised sentence also removes the repeated or and makes the alternatives easier to follow.

× Not really 'cause mostly citizens use a car specially it's a long trip or even they use electric bikes or or motorcycles which makes it more comfortable and useless in our roads.

✓ Not really, because most citizens use cars, especially when it's a long trip, or they use electric bikes or motorcycles, which are more comfortable and useful on our roads.

Use on with roads when describing where vehicles are used. The original phrase in our roads uses the wrong preposition. Say on our roads.