自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答过去的经历，注意使用过去时：用“Yes, I did”而不是“Yes, I have”。表达不喜欢时可说“I didn’t really like it”；说明原因时用“I felt unsafe because I couldn’t keep my balance”。避免重复“I’m”和过多填充词，并确认“the later bike”想表达的具体意思。

範例: Yes, I did. My mum gave me a bike when I was six, but I didn’t really enjoy riding it because I felt unsafe and couldn’t keep my balance.

建議: 开头直接回答“Bikes are very popular in my country”，注意主谓一致：bikes 是复数，应使用“they are”。把街边的公共自行车、扫码方式和价格优势按顺序说明；可用“for example”和“because”连接细节。表达“租车”可用“rent a bike”，不要说“spend less money and hire the bike”。

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. There are public bikes parked along many streets, and people can unlock one by scanning a QR code with their phones. They’re inexpensive and convenient, especially for short trips.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

问题问的是过去（Did you have...?），回答时应使用过去时助动词 did，而不是现在时 have。回答过去时的一般疑问句时，可以用“Yes, I did.”

× I really I'm not really like it.

✓ I didn't really like it.

表达“不喜欢”时，实义动词 like 前不应使用 be 动词 I'm。结合前文的过去时间，应使用“didn't + 动词原形”，即“didn't like”。

× I'm feeling dangerous.

✓ I felt unsafe.

dangerous 通常表示“会造成危险的”，例如 dangerous driving；这里想表达自己感到不安全，应使用 unsafe。

× I'm feeling dangerous because I can't keep the balance.

✓ I felt unsafe because I couldn't keep my balance.

这段经历发生在童年，叙述时应使用过去时：feel 改为 felt，can't 改为 couldn't。

× I can't keep the balance.

✓ I couldn't keep my balance.

这里说的是自己无法保持平衡，应使用物主限定词 my，表达“我的平衡”；“keep my balance”是自然的表达。

× Yes, it's very popular in my country.

✓ Yes, they are very popular in my country.

问题中的 bikes 是复数，因此应使用复数代词 they，而不是单数代词 it；相应地，be 动词也应使用 are。

× In my country near the street have lots of public bike.

✓ There are lots of public bikes near the streets in my country.

句子要表达“有很多公共自行车”，应使用“There are + 复数名词”的结构。不能直接用 have 表示某处存在某物。

× lots of public bike

✓ lots of public bikes

lots of 后面表示许多可数名词时，名词应使用复数形式，所以 bike 要加 -s，变为 bikes。

× People can use using the phone and scan the QR code.

✓ People can use their phones to scan the QR code.

can 后应接动词原形 use；这里 use 后再接 using 结构不正确。表达“用手机扫描二维码”时，可以说“use their phones to scan the QR code”。