自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer responds directly and gives a clear reason and personal detail. To sound more natural and avoid repeating “bike,” use a pronoun or a more concise phrase. Also, say “see other children riding their bikes” rather than “see some other children ride a bike.”

範例: No, I didn’t have one when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford it. I really wanted a bike, though, and I used to watch other children riding theirs around my neighborhood.

建議: You give a clear opinion and a relevant explanation. Improve the naturalness by avoiding “the reason is because”; use “mainly because” instead. Use plural nouns when speaking generally (“cars,” “bikes”), and consider qualifying the comparison, since safety can depend on the road and location.

範例: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country, especially in big cities. Many people prefer driving because it’s usually faster and feels safer on busy roads. However, bikes are still useful for short trips in quieter areas.

× I think the reason is because driving the car is faster and safer. However, riding the bike is more dangerous and slower.

✓ I think the reason is because driving a car is faster and safer. However, riding a bike is more dangerous and slower.

The definite article the refers to a specific car or bike, but the student is speaking about cars and bikes in general. Use the indefinite article a when referring to a nonspecific singular countable noun. For general statements, you can also say driving is faster and safer and riding a bike is more dangerous and slower.