自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你重复了考官的问题，没有直接回答。先用“是”或“不是”回应，再补充一条具体信息，例如谁给你买的、你常在哪里骑，或你对那辆自行车的印象。

範例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small blue bike when I was about six, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood.

建議: 你表达了自行车在本国很受欢迎这一观点，但开头关于童年经历的句子与问题联系不清，且有明显语法错误，如“when I small”“my parents boat”和“bike are”。建议先直接回答问题，再用一个具体原因或例子支持观点；可说“when I was young”“my parents bought me a bicycle”和“people use bicycles to get around”。

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country. Many people use them to commute or run errands, especially in busy cities where traffic can be heavy. They’re also an affordable and convenient way to get around.

× When I small my parents boat bicycle for me and I think popular.

✓ When I was young, my parents bought a bicycle for me, and I think bicycles are popular.

“When I small”缺少谓语动词。表示“我小时候”应说“When I was young”，其中需要使用be动词was。

× When I small my parents boat bicycle for me and I think popular.

✓ When I was young, my parents bought a bicycle for me, and I think bicycles are popular.

这里描述父母过去给你买自行车的事情，应使用过去式。“boat”不是“买”的正确形式，应改为“bought”。

× When I small my parents boat bicycle for me and I think popular.

✓ When I was young, my parents bought a bicycle for me, and I think bicycles are popular.

“bicycle”是可数名词单数，前面需要冠词。这里应说“a bicycle”。

× When I small my parents boat bicycle for me and I think popular.

✓ When I was young, my parents bought a bicycle for me, and I think bicycles are popular.

“I think popular”中缺少表示状态的谓语动词，也没有说明“受欢迎”的对象。应补上主语和be动词，例如“I think bicycles are popular”。

× I think bike are popular in my country because many people buy bicycle go through travel.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because many people buy bicycles to travel.

这里泛指自行车，应使用复数“bikes”。“many people buy”后泛指自行车时也应使用复数“bicycles”。

× I think bike are popular in my country because many people buy bicycle go through travel.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because many people buy bicycles to travel.

“buy bicycle go through travel”把几个动词结构直接连接在一起，句子结构不完整。表达“买自行车来旅行”时，可用“buy bicycles to travel”，用不定式说明目的。