自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly, then briefly describe the bike and how you used it. Use past-tense forms consistently: say “I had” and “I used,” not “I have” and “I use.” Replace the unclear phrase “was given with” with “was given to me by.” Avoid repeating that it was a gift, and use a linking phrase such as “I often rode it with my friends.”

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was red and had three wheels, so it was easy for me to ride. My dad gave it to me as a gift, and I often rode it with my friends.

建議: Give a clear answer and support it with one or two specific observations. Use plural forms and correct verb patterns: “riding bikes,” “to work or school,” and “I see.” For a contrast, use “At weekends” or “On weekends.” Remove the repeated “a lot more” and the unclear phrase at the end; explain what people use bikes for instead.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. I often see people riding them to work or school, especially on weekday mornings and afternoons. At weekends, more people seem to use bikes to get around the city or enjoy a ride.

× I have one bike when I'm with child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The answer refers to a past childhood experience, so use the past-tense forms had and was. Use a child to describe yourself at that age.

× It was red and it has three wheels and I always use it with my friends.

✓ It was red, it had three wheels, and I always used it with my friends.

The speaker is describing a bike from childhood, so keep the verbs in the past tense: had and used. Maintaining the same tense throughout makes the timeline clear.

× My bike was given with uh from my dad and it was as a gift.

✓ My bike was given to me by my dad as a gift.

Use given to me to identify the recipient and by my dad to identify the person who gave the bike. The phrase as a gift is sufficient; it does not need it was before it.

× Yes of course I always see people riding bike for work or go to school, especially on weekdays they are using it in the morning and in the afternoon.

✓ Yes, of course. I always see people riding bikes to work or to school, especially on weekdays.

Use the plural bikes because the sentence refers to people riding bikes in general, not one specific bike.

× Yes of course I always see people riding bike for work or go to school, especially on weekdays they are using it in the morning and in the afternoon.

✓ Yes, of course. I always see people riding bikes to work or to school, especially on weekdays.

Use to work and to school to express the destinations. For work does not fit this sentence as naturally, and go to school does not parallel the phrase riding bikes.

× Yes of course I always see people riding bike for work or go to school, especially on weekdays they are using it in the morning and in the afternoon.

✓ Yes, of course. I always see people riding bikes to work or to school; especially on weekdays, they use them in the morning and in the afternoon.

This describes a regular habit, so use the simple present use rather than the present progressive are using. The simple present is the usual tense for routines and general observations.

× Yes of course I always see people riding bike for work or go to school, especially on weekdays they are using it in the morning and in the afternoon.

✓ Yes, of course. I always see people riding bikes to work or to school; especially on weekdays, they use them in the morning and in the afternoon.

The pronoun must agree with bikes, which is plural. Use them instead of it.

× But on weekend I always seen a lot more lot of bike using P by people around the city.

✓ But on weekends, I always see a lot more bikes being used by people around the city.

Use the plural weekends when referring to weekends in general, and bikes because the sentence refers to multiple bikes.

× But on weekend I always seen a lot more lot of bike using P by people around the city.

✓ But on weekends, I always see a lot more bikes being used by people around the city.

Always describes a repeated observation, so use the simple present see. Seen is a past participle and cannot be used by itself as the main verb here.

× But on weekend I always seen a lot more lot of bike using P by people around the city.

✓ But on weekends, I always see a lot more bikes being used by people around the city.

The bikes receive the action of being used, so use the passive form being used. Using by people is not a grammatical passive construction.