自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中把“bike”说成了“bag”，导致没有直接回答问题，这是最需要改正的地方。先明确说小时候有没有自行车，再补充具体信息，例如几岁得到、是谁送的或经常在哪里骑。注意使用过去时：描述过去的礼物时说“was a gift”。避免重复表达同一件事。

範例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was 12, as a birthday present from my grandmother. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school.

建議: 你表达了自行车很受欢迎，也提到了人们骑车锻炼，但句子结构不自然，且“when I'm hanging out on the street”和“do something else”不够具体。开头直接回答观点，然后用清晰的连接词补充一两个具体原因或场景，例如通勤、锻炼或休闲。注意说“many people ride bikes”，不要说“many people they ride their bike”。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many people ride them in parks or along rivers to exercise, especially on weekends. They’re also a convenient way to get around short distances.

× Uh, yes, I had a bag when I was a child and uh it's a gift from my grandmother when I was 12 years old.

✓ Uh, yes, I had a bag when I was a child, and it was a gift from my grandmother when I was 12 years old.

句子描述的是过去发生的事情，且有明确的过去时间“when I was 12 years old”，因此应将现在时“it's”改为过去时“it was”。

× And because when I'm hanging out on the street I always say so many people they uh ride their bike and to uh strengthen their body or do something else.

✓ When I'm hanging out on the street, I always say that so many people ride their bikes to strengthen their bodies or do something else.

“And because when”造成句子开头结构混乱；这里直接用“When”引导时间状语从句即可。另外，“so many people”已经是主语，不需要再加“they”。在“say”后添加“that”可以清楚地引出所说的内容。

× And because when I'm hanging out on the street I always say so many people they uh ride their bike and to uh strengthen their body or do something else.

✓ When I'm hanging out on the street, I always say that so many people ride their bikes to strengthen their bodies or do something else.

“so many people”表示多人，因此这里用复数“bikes”和“bodies”与语境保持一致。注意，“their”本身不随单复数变化，但它后面的名词需要根据语境使用单数或复数。