自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答是否有自行车，再说明原因。注意谈论童年时使用过去时，例如“didn’t have”和“couldn’t afford”；避免重复“poor”，并用更自然、具体的表达说明家庭当时的经济情况。

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family didn’t have much money, so my parents couldn’t afford one. I usually walked to school or played with friends near my home instead.

建議: 回答切题，也提供了公共自行车和日常出行的例子。建议把“'cause”换成较正式的“because”，并将“around the street”改为“on the streets”或“available throughout the city”；“use bikes for as”语法不正确，可说“use bikes as”。可补充具体用途，让回答更自然连贯。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Public bikes are available on many streets, so people can easily rent one near a train station. Many commuters use them for short trips because they’re convenient and inexpensive.

× In my generation, we don't have a bike at that age, we're super poor, poor.

✓ In my generation, we didn't have a bike at that age; we were super poor.

这句话描述的是童年时期的情况，应使用一般过去时。将“don't have”改为“didn't have”，将“we're”改为“we were”。“poor”重复属于口语重复，不是所列语法问题，因此不作为语法错误处理。

× So my parents cannot provide me a bike.

✓ So my parents couldn't provide me a bike.

句子讲的是过去童年时的情况，因此情态动词“can”应使用过去式“could”，即“couldn't”。

× Bikes are very popular in our country 'cause we have many public bikes around the street.

✓ Bikes are very popular in our country 'cause we have many public bikes on the streets.

这里表达公共自行车分布在街道上，用“on the streets”更合适；“around the street”在此处介词搭配不自然。

× Every time we go to the train station we can ride the bike.

✓ Every time we go to the train station, we can ride a public bike.

这里泛指可以骑的公共自行车，并非前文已明确提到的某一辆车，因此不宜用定冠词“the”。可以用“a public bike”表示任意一辆公共自行车。

× People usually use bikes for as their daily transportation.

✓ People usually use bikes as their daily transportation.

“use ... as ...”表示“把……用作……”。“as”前不需要再加“for”，因此应删除“for”。