自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly, then add one clear detail about the bike or how you used it. Reduce fillers such as “um” and “uh,” and check the unclear phrase “the color really reverents”; use a natural description such as “I really liked its color.”

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was six. My mother bought me a bright red one, and I loved its color. I used to ride it around the neighborhood.

建議: Your answer addresses the question and gives relevant reasons, but it becomes difficult to follow because of repeated fillers and unclear phrases such as “roadbags” and “cheap computer based.” Use “shared-bike schemes” and, if you mean a bicycle for exercise, “a road bike.” Finish your point with a clear linking phrase and a specific reason.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities where shared-bike schemes are widely available. I also bought a road bike for exercise and short commutes because cycling is convenient and inexpensive.

× The color really reverents.

✓ The color was really vibrant.

If the intended word is vibrant, it is an adjective and needs a linking verb. Add was to make the clause grammatically complete. The transcript may contain a misrecognized word, so this correction assumes vibrant was intended.

× There’s a lot of shared bike schemes.

✓ There are a lot of shared bike schemes.

The noun schemes is plural, so use the plural form are rather than there’s, which means there is. Alternatively, use the singular noun scheme: There’s a shared bike scheme.

× I also bought a roadbags for exercise and short commute because it’s convenient and cheap.

✓ I also bought a road bike for exercise and short commutes because it’s convenient and cheap.

The singular article a must be followed by a singular count noun, so use a road bike rather than a plural noun. Short commutes is also a natural plural form when referring generally to multiple trips.