自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答是否有自行车，再补充一两个具体细节，例如自行车的大小、颜色，或你小时候通常骑它做什么。原回答中“when I go to school I will go back”意思不清，而且句子没有说完；建议使用简单、完整的句子，并减少停顿和重复。

範例: Yes, I had a small blue bike when I was a child. I often rode it to school and around my neighborhood with my friends.

建議: 回答了自行车受欢迎这一点，但可以进一步说明受欢迎的原因，并用连接词把理由和例子连起来。“It is useful and expensive”表达不够自然，也和实用这一优点不太匹配；可以根据本意改为“convenient and affordable”。“We can go to school with friends”建议改成更自然的表达，例如“people can ride to school with their friends”。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are convenient and affordable. For example, many students ride them to school, and people also use them to travel short distances.

× When I go to school I will go back.

✓ When I went to school, I went back.

问题类型：过去时问题。这里是在回答小时候的经历，应使用过去时。将“go”改为“went”；“will go”表示将来，与过去的语境不符，应改为“went”。

× It is small.

✓ It was small.

问题类型：过去时问题。这里描述的是小时候拥有的自行车，因此应使用过去时“was”，而不是现在时“is”。