自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Use the past simple because the question asks about your childhood. Add the article “a” before “bike,” and answer directly. You could add one specific detail, such as when or where you rode it.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

建議: Say “bikes are popular in my country” rather than “the bike is popular to our country.” Replace the unclear phrase “the daily and transportation” with a natural expression such as “a common way to get around.” Avoid fillers like “um” and “uh,” and connect your reasons clearly. Give one specific example if possible.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they’re an affordable and convenient way to get around, especially for short trips. They’re also a good form of exercise, so many people use them to commute or stay active.

× Yes, I do have bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past time, indicated by when you were a child, so the verb should be in the past tense. Use had instead of do have.

× Yes, I do have bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

Bike is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a before bike.

× Yes, of course the bike is so popular to our country because that is the um daily and transportation to our place and of course that is uh good for the body as a source of exercise.

✓ Yes, of course. Bikes are very popular in our country because they are a common form of daily transportation, and they are good for the body as a form of exercise.

Use in to refer to something being popular within a country. To does not express this meaning; say popular in our country.

× Yes, of course the bike is so popular to our country because that is the um daily and transportation to our place and of course that is uh good for the body as a source of exercise.

✓ Yes, of course. Bikes are very popular in our country because they are a common form of daily transportation, and they are good for the body as a form of exercise.

The phrase the daily and transportation is not a grammatical construction. Use a common form of daily transportation. The corrected version also connects the ideas in a clear, complete sentence.