自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời có ý định nói về chiếc xe đạp mẹ mua, nhưng nhiều từ và cấu trúc chưa rõ nghĩa (ví dụ “bite” thay vì “bike”, “is help me happy”). Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó nêu một chi tiết cụ thể về chiếc xe và cảm xúc của bạn. Dùng thì quá khứ đơn: “My mother bought…” và “It made me…”.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother bought it for me, and I was very happy because it was my first bike. I rode it around my neighborhood after school.

建議: Bạn đã trả lời trực tiếp và đưa ra lý do phù hợp là xe đạp tiện lợi, ít tốn kém. Tuy nhiên, cần phát âm và dùng đúng từ “bikes” (không phải “bats” hoặc “pies”), đồng thời sửa cấu trúc “love … and using” thành “use them”. Hãy thêm một chi tiết cụ thể về cách người Việt sử dụng xe đạp.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Vietnam because they are affordable and convenient. Many people use them for short trips, especially in smaller towns. They are also a practical way to get around when traffic is heavy.

× That is the heat my mother bought for me is help me happy and love mother.

✓ The bike my mother bought for me made me happy and helped me love my mother.

The original sentence joins clauses incorrectly and uses an incomplete construction in 'help me happy.' Use a clear subject and predicate, 'make someone happy,' and 'help someone do something.'

× That is the heat my mother bought for me is help me happy and love mother.

✓ The bike my mother bought for me made me happy and helped me love my mother.

The student is describing a childhood experience, so the verbs should be in the past tense. Use 'made' and 'helped' rather than 'is' and 'help.'

× Yes, I think bats are popular in my country because it's convenient and cheap.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because they are convenient and cheap.

The pronoun 'it' is singular, but it refers to plural bikes. Use the plural pronoun 'they' and the plural verb 'are.'

× Vietnamese people love pies and using every day.

✓ Vietnamese people love bikes and use them every day.

The verb 'use' needs an object in this sentence. Use the pronoun 'them' to refer to bikes.