自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly in a complete sentence, and avoid repeating or restarting phrases. Add one brief, specific detail—such as why you did not have a bike or how you got around. Practise the past-tense structure “I didn’t have…” followed by a clear reason.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents usually drove me to school, so I didn’t really need one.

建議: Start with a clear answer, then support it with one or two relevant details. Replace unclear phrases such as “some pillar place” and “Big big” with accurate words, and check subject–verb agreement and plural forms (for example, “workers ride” and “bike-sharing services”). Use a linking phrase such as “For example” to introduce a specific example, and avoid trying to include too many points in one sentence.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. They’re a convenient way to avoid traffic, and many students and office workers cycle to school or work. There are also bike-sharing services in several major cities.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I I when I child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The phrase 'when I child' is missing a verb. Use 'was' before the noun phrase 'a child' to form the past-tense clause 'when I was a child.'

× When Well, yes, I think bikes are quite popular in some pillar place, especially in cities because they are safe and help people avoid traffic.

✓ Well, yes, I think bikes are quite popular in some popular places, especially in cities, because they are safe and help people avoid traffic.

The determiner 'some' is used here with a plural count noun, so 'place' should be 'places.' The repeated word 'When' is a speech disfluency, not a grammar error; it is omitted for readability. 'Pillar' appears to be an unclear word in the transcript; 'popular' is used here to make the phrase grammatical and fit the context.

× For example, many students are an office worker, rides bikes to work or school and there are also bike sharing service in Big big.

✓ For example, many students and office workers ride bikes to work or school, and there are also bike-sharing services in big cities.

The subject 'many students and office workers' is plural, so it takes the base-form verb 'ride,' not 'rides.' The phrase 'are an office worker' does not agree with the plural subject and is removed. The phrase 'there are' also needs the plural noun 'services.' 'Big big' is unclear in the transcript; 'big cities' is used to complete the likely intended phrase.