自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你直接回答了问题，但后一句的“back”应为“bike”，而且讲过去的经历要使用过去时“had”，不能用“have”。可以补充一个具体细节，例如自行车的样子或你骑车的地点，让回答更自然、完整。

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small bike when I was about eight, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school.

建議: 你表达了肯定观点，但多次把“bikes”说成“bags”或“backs”，导致意思不清楚；“many of cities”和后半句的语法也需要调整。建议先清晰地回答自行车是否受欢迎，再用一个具体原因或例子支持观点，并避免重复和过多填充词。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them to get around busy cities because they are affordable and easy to park.

× I have a back when I was a child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

“when I was a child”指过去的时间，因此动词应使用过去式“had”，而不是现在式“have”。根据考官的问题，这里应为“bike”；“back”不属于语法错误，可能是识别或发音造成的用词偏差。

× Many of uh many of cities have had bags, have backs people very like redbacks.

✓ Many cities have bikes, and people really like them.

“many”后直接接可数名词复数时应说“many cities”，不需要介词“of”。口语填充词“uh”和重复表达应删去。根据上下文，句中的“bags / backs / redbacks”可能是“bikes”的识别偏差；这不属于语法问题。

× Many of uh many of cities have had bags, have backs people very like redbacks.

✓ Many cities have bikes, and people really like them.

“very”通常不能直接修饰动词“like”。表达“非常喜欢”时，可以用“really like”。例如：“People really like bikes.”