自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly, then add one clear supporting detail. Avoid repeating “bike,” and use “that I loved” or “which I loved” to describe it. Split the answer into two sentences so the ideas are easier to follow.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I loved it. My dad taught me how to ride it, and we often practised together.

建議: Give a direct answer and explain why with natural phrasing. “Access to everywhere” is incorrect; say “get almost anywhere by bike” or “travel around easily by bike.” Keep the reason concise and avoid repeating the idea of convenience.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Taiwan. Since many places are relatively close together, people can get around easily by bike, especially in cities.

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because Taiwan is a small island that you can access to everywhere with bicycles and it is also convenient for us to move around.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because Taiwan is a small island where you can get everywhere by bicycle, and it is also convenient for us to move around.

The verb access is used directly with its object, without the preposition to. Also, by bicycle is the natural preposition phrase for describing a way of travelling. You could say: Taiwan is a small island where you can get everywhere by bicycle.