自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答切题，也提到了和朋友一起骑车的经历，但时态需要保持一致：谈童年时应使用过去时，例如“had”“rode”。“I usually ride a bike, go...”的句子结构不完整，最后的“maybe we”也没有说完。建议用一句话直接回答，再补充一两个具体细节，并在句子之间使用“and”或“because”等连接词。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it to my neighbour’s backyard to meet my best friend, and we would ride around the garden together.

建議: 回答表达了明确观点，也给出了交通拥堵这一原因。注意名词搭配和单复数：“bikes are a popular form of transport”比“bike is very popular transport”更自然。“steal time”不能表达节省时间，应改为“save time”；“commute time”也可简化为“commute”。建议减少重复的“my country”，并用更自然的连接方式组织理由。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in busy cities. Morning traffic can be really heavy, so cycling is a convenient way to get around and save time on your commute.

× Of course, uh, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Of course, uh, I had a bike when I was a child.

句子中的“when I was a child”表示过去，因此主句也要使用过去时。“have”应改为“had”。

× I usually ride a bike, go to my neighbor's backyard to find my best friend.

✓ I usually rode my bike and went to my neighbor's backyard to find my best friend.

这句话描述的是童年时的习惯和经历，应使用过去时。“ride”要改为“rode”，“go”要改为“went”。并列的动作也应使用连词连接。

× Uh we play together.

✓ Uh, we played together.

上下文描述的是小时候的事情，因此应使用一般过去时。“play”的过去式是“played”。

× We ride the bike, go to the garden, maybe we

✓ We rode our bikes and went to the garden.

这句话继续描述过去的经历，所以“ride”和“go”应分别改为过去式“rode”和“went”。原句最后的“maybe we”没有接完整的内容；修改后的句子去掉了这个未完成的部分。

× Yes, I think uh bike is very popular transport, uh, in my country because my country has a very heavy traffic jam in the morning.

✓ Yes, I think a bike is a very popular means of transport in my country because my country has a very heavy traffic jam in the morning.

单数可数名词“bike”前需要冠词“a”；“means of transport”前也需要冠词“a”。因此应说“a bike”和“a very popular means of transport”。