自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly in the past tense, then add one clear detail about how you used the bike. Avoid restarting sentences and repeating words such as “bike” and “bicycle.” Use the past form “rode” rather than “am just go,” and keep your response to two or three clear sentences.

範例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood and sometimes to visit my friends. It was a simple bike, but I really enjoyed having it.

建議: Give a direct answer and support it with a specific reason or example. Replace the unclear phrase “two days” with an accurate expression, and say “many people own a bike” rather than “every people have bike.” Reduce fillers and avoid repeating that bikes are popular at both the beginning and end.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them to go to the market or run errands nearby because they are affordable and convenient. They are especially common in smaller towns.

× I know I have a going to bike when I was child

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past experience, so use the past-tense verb had rather than have. Keep the verb tense consistent with was.

× when I was child

✓ when I was a child

Child is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a before child.

× on that I am just go out anywhere

✓ I just went out anywhere on it.

The student is describing what they did in the past, so went is the appropriate past-tense form. Am go is not a grammatical verb form.

× with bike, they just go to market

✓ By bike, they just go to the market.

Use by bike to describe the means of transportation. With bike is not the usual prepositional phrase for this meaning.

× every people

✓ every person

Every is used with a singular countable noun, such as person. Alternatively, say all people.

× every people have bike

✓ Every person has a bike.

Every person is grammatically singular, so it takes the singular verb has, not have.

× have bike

✓ have a bike

Bike is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a before bike.