自行车— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
考生
Yes I did. I got a bike when I was about 7:00 because my parents bought it so I could learn to ride at school. I remember practicing every afternoon and feeling extremely proud when I could ride without my dad's help.
考官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
考生
Uh, not yet. I think the bags are not that popular in my country, uh, though we have uh, shared bikes everywhere, but everyone prefer to uh, go to work by public transportation like the, the underground or uh, the private cars.
評估
總分
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
分數: 84.0建議: 回答直接，细节具体，也有个人感受，整体结构清晰。注意年龄应说“seven years old”，而不是“7:00”；“learn to ride at school”表达不够自然，可改为“learn to ride”。还可以用“because of this”或“after a few weeks”等连接或补充练习的结果。
範例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven because my parents wanted me to learn how to ride. I practiced every afternoon, and I felt extremely proud when I could ride without my dad's help.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
分數: 48.0建議: 回答中有较多停顿词和重复，影响流畅度；“the bags”应为“bikes”，“everyone prefer”应改为“everyone prefers”。“not yet”不适合直接表达目前是否流行，而且“though”和“but”不应同时使用。建议先明确表态，再用共享单车和通勤方式的对比解释原因。
範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially shared bikes in big cities. However, many people still take the underground or drive to work because these options are more convenient for longer journeys.
文法
× Everyone prefer to go to work by public transportation.
✓ Everyone prefers to go to work by public transportation.
“Everyone”在语法上是第三人称单数，因此一般现在时的谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“prefers”，不能用“prefer”。建议看到 everyone、someone、each 等主语时，检查谓语是否需要加 -s 或 -es。
× Everyone prefers to go to work by public transportation like the underground or the private cars.
✓ Everyone prefers to go to work by public transportation like the underground or private cars.
这里的“private cars”泛指私家车这一类交通方式，不是特指某几辆车，因此不需要加定冠词“the”。建议泛指复数可数名词时通常不加“the”；若指双方都知道的特定事物，才使用“the”。
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