自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答与问题相关，但有多处发音或用词不清，例如“back”应为“bike”，“I very like it”应为“I really liked it”。注意使用过去时描述童年经历，并用一到两句补充具体细节；“quiet”也不适合描述骑车，若想表达骑得好可说“well”。

範例: Yes, I had a blue bike when I was a child. It belonged to my father, but he let me ride it. I really liked it because riding around the neighborhood was a lot of fun.

建議: 你提到了骑车不安全以及人们更常选择汽车或公交车，但开头说“不流行”与“很多人骑车”相互矛盾。先明确表达立场，再说明原因；注意主谓一致和表达方式，例如“many people ride bikes”“prefer cars or buses”。

範例: I wouldn’t say bikes are very popular in my country. Although some people ride them for short trips, many prefer to travel by car or bus because the roads can be busy and cycling may feel unsafe.

× Yes, I have a blue back.

✓ Yes, I had a blue bike.

问题问的是你小时候有没有自行车，因此应使用一般过去时。把 have 改为 had。这里将 back 按语境理解为 bike；回答过去经历时，注意让动词时态与问题中的时间一致。

× It is my father back with you.

✓ It was my father's bike.

原句中 my father back with you 的词语组合无法构成完整、清楚的意思。结合上下文，可表达为“那是我父亲的自行车”：用所有格 my father's 表示所属关系，并用 bike 补全名词。由于谈论的是小时候的自行车，用 was 更符合过去语境。

× I very like it.

✓ I really like it.

very 通常不能直接修饰动词 like。要表达“非常喜欢”，可以用 really 修饰 like，例如 I really like it。

× I can ride a bike very quiet.

✓ I can ride a bike very quietly.

quiet 是形容词，不能直接修饰动作 ride。这里需要副词 quietly 来说明骑车的方式。一般来说，修饰动词时应使用副词。

× My country have lots of people ride bike very dangerous.

✓ My country has lots of people who ride bikes, and riding them is very dangerous.

my country 是第三人称单数作主语，谓语动词 have 应改为 has。一般现在时中，第三人称单数主语通常要使用带 -s 或 -es 的动词形式。

× My country have lots of people ride bike very dangerous.

✓ My country has lots of people who ride bikes, and riding them is very dangerous.

这里说的是人们通常骑自行车，bike 应使用复数 bikes。表达一般类别或泛指多辆自行车时，注意使用复数名词。

× My country have lots of people ride bike very dangerous.

✓ My country has lots of people who ride bikes, and riding them is very dangerous.

原句把 lots of people、ride bike 和 very dangerous 直接连在一起，缺少清晰的句子结构。可以用 who ride bikes 修饰 people，再用 riding them is very dangerous 构成完整表达。描述事情“很危险”时，也需要明确说明什么是危险的。

× Often people rather car or bus.

✓ People often prefer cars or buses.

原句缺少合适的谓语动词，而且 rather 不能直接连接 people 和 car or bus 来表达“更喜欢”。可用 prefer 表示“更喜欢”，构成 prefer + 名词；表示多种交通工具时，用 cars or buses。