自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly, then describe one clear memory. Use “bicycle” or “bike” rather than “bike cycle,” and correct the grammar in “my father bought me which I really used to love.” Explain what you mean by “I failed in it”—for example, whether you struggled to learn to ride. Reduce fillers and avoid repeating “but.”

範例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. My father bought it for me, and I loved riding it with him. He tried to teach me how to ride, but I found it difficult at first.

建議: Give a direct answer and support it with a specific reason or example. Replace “nearby distances” with “short distances,” and say “four-wheeled vehicles” or “cars” instead of “four vehicle, four tire vehicles.” Avoid the broad claim that everybody cannot afford a car; you could say that bikes are a more affordable option for many people. Remove fillers and make clear whether you mean bicycles or motorbikes.

範例: Yes, bikes are popular in my country, especially for short journeys. Many people use them to get to nearby shops or work because they are cheaper to run than cars. They are also convenient in busy areas where traffic can be heavy.

× So um, my father bought me which I really used to love it, and I used to regularly go for a ride with my father.

✓ My father bought me a bike, which I really loved, and I used to regularly go for a ride with my father.

The phrase 'bought me which' does not form a complete, grammatical clause, and 'which' and 'it' redundantly refer to the same bike. Use 'bought me a bike, which I really loved' to make the relative clause clear and avoid repeating the object.

× He used to teach me and but uh but I failed in it so that's okay.

✓ He used to teach me, but I failed at it, so that's okay.

The conjunctions 'and' and 'but' are used together unnecessarily, and 'but' is repeated. Use one conjunction to show the contrast between his teaching and your difficulty.

× He used to teach me and but uh but I failed in it so that's okay.

✓ He used to teach me, but I failed at it, so that's okay.

The natural preposition after 'fail' when describing an activity or skill is 'at': 'fail at it,' not 'fail in it.'

× So uh bikes are very much necessary for us.

✓ So, bikes are very necessary for us.

This sentence is understandable, but 'very necessary' is the more natural way to intensify the adjective 'necessary.' The original does not clearly contain a quantifier error, so no correction is required under the listed grammar types.

× ...and everybody couldn't afford a four vehicle, four tire vehicles.

✓ ...and not everybody can afford a four-wheeled vehicle.

'Everybody couldn't' can suggest that nobody could afford one, rather than that some people cannot. Use 'not everybody can' to express that the ability does not apply to everyone. The present tense 'can' also fits the general statement about people in the country.

× ...and everybody couldn't afford a four vehicle, four tire vehicles.

✓ ...and not everybody can afford a four-wheeled vehicle.

The singular article 'a' must be followed by a singular noun. Use 'a vehicle,' not 'a ... vehicles.'